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Jerrybaldy
09-30-2013, 07:10 PM
People are best avoided
unless they are fleeting.
Fleeting people
are to be embraced in goodbyes.
They pass like ghosts
gone before they arrived.
Fleeting friends
never let you down.
I saw you on the bus.
I loved you all at once.
Let's leave it there.
Unf uckedup
fleeting perfection.

MystyrMystyry
09-30-2013, 07:30 PM
Like it. The mood I'm in it's genius.

MystyrMystyry
09-30-2013, 07:33 PM
I mean it might still be genius when my mood lifts, but for this moment it definitely is, JB ;)

AuntShecky
10-01-2013, 06:21 PM
This isn't very much different from the experience of Dante when he first spotted Beatrice on the street when they were both little kids. There is also a scene in Citizen Kane in which Everett Sloane's character tells the reporter investigating Kane's life that he (Sloane) once saw a young girl in the window of a passing train and that years later not a day goes by that he doesn't think of her.

Your piece reflects a keen observation of an aspect of human nature in that speculation upon what might have been can be more satisfying than the actuality.