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Delta40
09-25-2013, 03:35 AM
Us twirling round
our hair blowing free.
Bare feet leaving
short-lived footprints
in the sand.

The braided cotton
of our shirts
matched the weave
of our friendship.
Secretive longings
tucked inside our skirts.

We spun and hung on,
our faces bright
underneath the cloudy day.
Round and round
we went,
our ritual dance complete.

Dizzily we staggered
toward the roaring waves,
laughing how tomorrow
meant nothing
if we were never apart.

Us losing our balance
swallowed up,
swept away,
lost.

AuntShecky
09-26-2013, 12:44 AM
I was going to question "us" (instead of "we're") until it dawned one me that this is exactly the way kids talk.

Delta40
09-26-2013, 02:22 AM
Thanks aunty. I hope you enjoyed it.

Haunted
10-02-2013, 02:07 AM
It captures the moment Delta. Something nice about a girlfriend poem.

Delta40
10-02-2013, 02:40 AM
Thanks haunted. Glad you noticed its quality x

virtuoso
10-11-2013, 05:43 AM
That is the penultimate ending of puppy love! No cling-ons in this innocent tryst! A nice, free-flowing, but light poem. Enjoyed your worthy poem.