unaware

[cacian]

for this review weekend only I post this here only so please do feel free to take apart.;) I am wondering wheter the use of WE is too much for example.

we spoke on the train
we spoke on the road
we spoke on the phone
but we never spoke of love

we said all in the rain
we said much in the sun
we said more in the snow
but we never mentioned love

we talked in the days
we talked in the nights
we talked in between
but we never talked of love

and so we walked away
drifted to no apart
each other separate
card
not one word about
where we would be
if we'd said
is there love in the air?

we were much a pair
like friends in the rare
smiles our true romance
enjoying chat and air
but never
we would care
had trouble was a stir
but love was not aware

we simply did not stare
into each other's spare
like lovers in the fair
time had us truly plaire
but love was simply bare