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Catamite
09-12-2013, 01:58 PM
Out of the window there was brown earth salted with snow
some houses popped out of vast space like bats, occasionally
a racing stripe of road cut through all of it

till the train moved
past city proper

A couple their English slaked with a European drift
sometimes a hand slipping to a knee or thigh;
and I did not mind their seeing me glancing.

They were what might I be of!
weather of my mind permitting. I looked out
to the earth again, their gathered ease flowering my jealousy.
And the picture of the window’s eye slipped between
grass and road like a fumbling hand.

Sat with my book I set up home.

AuntShecky
09-13-2013, 03:30 PM
The syntax (word order) of l.9 and the closing line baffles me.

YesNo
09-14-2013, 09:13 AM
I'm puzzled by line 9 also.

Line 10 has "weather of my mind" that reminded me of my mind yesterday which seemed to correspond with the windy weather I was experiencing in Wisconsin.