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Jerrybaldy
08-31-2013, 07:07 PM
What living could be taking place
Whilst writing of thoughts
That have come and gone?
Dad, you are dead.
I can't come for a pint right now.
Dave next door is alive.
Throw me a ball Dad, whilst I sleep
Ten year old me will be thrilled
and excitedly kick it back.
I could be drinking a pint with Dave now
Instead of writing of it.
I could be writing of night terrors
If Dave hadn't asked me for a pint.
F uck you Dave.
I am busy.
I have to capture something.
You are in it.
Supporting role.
I am writing a poem of wasting time writing.
I am writing a poem of writing a poem of wasting time writing.
Dave, your wife is leaving you for me.
Only joking.
Sorry Dave.
She would never leave you for me.
She is screwing Tom at number four.

Delta40
08-31-2013, 07:47 PM
Sounds like you went for a pint when you wrote of night terrors so that sort of threw every brilliant line after out a little

Haunted
09-03-2013, 02:53 AM
Poignancy mixed with profanity in ways that only you can pull off. Enjoy your pint ;)