Brook

[Quantareau]

Brook

The brook wagged quite mischievously
meandering on its' way
under branches, over stones.
a curious child at play.

[tailor STATELY]

I love the lightness of your poem.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

[Quantareau]

I love the lightness of your poem.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

Glad you liked it. Have a great day!

[virtuoso]

I like the simile you used. I think that 'swaggered" would sound better than "wagged". Enjoyed your light verse.