flower

[mahmod qabaga]

my Flower beauty
paints light , dances in the river

Her spirit erupted sense, for poets
As for me ......!

Flower walked in across the fields
Her tickle affected the eye balls
it settled ​​the Perfume life line
Love and purity
There are hug
Between the flower and the spirit of life
Their love Constantly repeated

my sky wears colors

Holds dew drops on the paddle
Derives from it love and life
Compete on the flanks between moons and stars
give her a good Sons
her glory cup Irrigate the wine for stars ,
and her Breast give milk to children

red flowers were picked up
and translated between lovers

[tailor STATELY]

Welcome to Litnet !

Some syntax errors in the English rendering, but the poetry shines.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

[Delta40]

I agree about the syntax but sometimes it's refreshing

[mahmod qabaga]

I agree about the syntax but sometimes it's refreshing

hi dear
thanks for u for u talking about my writing
i think in future my writing well improved

[mahmod qabaga]

Welcome to Litnet !

Some syntax errors in the English rendering, but the poetry shines.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY


hi dear
thanks for u for u talking about my writing
i think in future my writing well improved

this poem for me translated from arabic
i have many poets wrote in arabic language

[cacian]

hi dear
thanks for u for u talking about my writing
i think in future my writing well improved

this poem for me translated from arabic
i have many poets wrote in arabic language

nice.

[mahmod qabaga]

nice.
thanks for u
u seem very kind

[mahmod qabaga]

flower is a part of our motion and mind
we must take care

[cacian]

flower is a part of our motion and mind
we must take care

indeed in the same way that we must not eat it. :)
a flower is to be admired to eat is a plot to destroy it. :)

[mahmod qabaga]

indeed in the same way that we must not eat it. :)
a flower is to be admired to eat is a plot to destroy it. :)


thanks for sharing my writing

[mahmod qabaga]

my Flower beauty
paints light , dances in the river

Her spirit erupted sense, for poets
As for me ......!

Flower walked in across the fields
Her tickle affected the eye balls
it settled ​​the Perfume life line
Love and purity
There are hug
Between the flower and the spirit of life
Their love Constantly repeated

my sky wears colors

Holds dew drops on the paddle
Derives from it love and life
Compete on the flanks between moons and stars
give her a good Sons
her glory cup Irrigate the wine for stars ,
and her Breast give milk to children

red flowers were picked up
and translated between lovers

[108 fountains]

Good translation is so important. Sometimes, especially when translating from non-Western languages, it's better to try to capture the idea rather than the literal word for word translation. What you have here is very beautiful; I'm sure it's even more beautiful in Arabic. I will suggest you use the word "embraces" instead of "hug" in line nine, and in line six instead of "eye balls," you might want to try "sight" or "vision" or "view" or possibly even "visual perception."

[mahmod qabaga]

Good translation is so important. Sometimes, especially when translating from non-Western languages, it's better to try to capture the idea rather than the literal word for word translation. What you have here is very beautiful; I'm sure it's even more beautiful in Arabic. I will suggest you use the word "embraces" instead of "hug" in line nine, and in line six instead of "eye balls," you might want to try "sight" or "vision" or "view" or possibly even "visual perception."

thanks dear friend for u talking that enhanced me
i am grateful about u

[mahmod qabaga]

thanks for all

i feel happy with you