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Stilton
08-15-2013, 01:37 AM
I cast my gaze across the land.
My clairvoyancy knew no bounds.
Cities of forests lay beneath me.
I searched for the one in the crowd.

I found a tree in the center
It’s soul beat out to me.
The tallest of the forest.
1 full tree taller than all others.

Visions of a journey to the base of the tree.
What lies there now awaits for me.

W.C.
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drewbelmore01
09-23-2013, 07:08 AM
Nice piece and interesting. I would like to suggest you to be more poetic in selecting words in order to make your work more attractive.

Good Luck :)