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[Jerrybaldy]

Polo mints, pussies
Cats with tails held high
The brown, the pink
The kitchen sink
The window of your eye
The undarned sock
The keyless lock
Sugar donut, door unshut
The one you cut in flesh
Tish fet night's, a mesh
One waiting in the ground
In the theory you found
In some God above
unconditional love
your black silk glove
Swiss cheese
Honeycomb hexagons made by bees
The eye of a tornado
The heart of a volcano
Dear liza, oh f uck it
There's one in my bucket
In a super massive
Galactic thrill
And the one in me
I cannot fill.

[Delta40]

It's so nice that there's a pussy in every one of your poems. I miss England...

[Hawkman]

Holy crows, bald-man, don't fill those holes. You know there's no such thing as gravitas, right? Like the earth sucks, you dig, yeah keep digging, keep digging those ooooos :devil:

Great wordplay and driving rhythm with rhyming word association football! Gallons of fun.

Live long in wellness and prosperity - H

[Jerrybaldy]

I'm pretty sure that one of those statements is untrue ;)

[tailor STATELY]

My condolence.

Surgery soon ?

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

[Jerrybaldy]

Thank you Birdman. Always digging here :)

[Jerrybaldy]

Blimey is everybody on line in some unholy alliance? Thank you tailor. They are coming to take me away soon.

[tailor STATELY]

As my English Granny always said: "Keep your pecker up". (I would never say that of course :) )

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

[Hawkman]

We're not really on line, were outside your house! We're the ones in the ambulance with white coats on. We also do a great line in jackets.... ;)

[Jerrybaldy]

Just checked the pecker tailor and goddamit, found a hole :D you are definitely not outside Mr Bird as I just popped out and did a perfect impression of the cry of the lesser spotted tit and not a sound came back.

[Jerrybaldy]

Hold on a minute. Is having fun still permitted here?

[Delta40]

Dammit I'm epileptic and there is nobody here!

[Hawkman]

It's compulsory. Aren't you having fun? I am. I've eaten all the lesser spotted tits, which is why they didn't respond to you. I'm gonna have to write a book called the silence of the tits now :devil:

[tailor STATELY]

lol
...

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Not as good as 'O' by Richard Wilbur, but between the smut and the sentimentality, you sometimes come out with some telling observations and great lines, Jerry.

(And you can have that as a quote on the back of your first book. Maybe Bloodaxe would be interested in your stuff...?)

[AuntShecky]

I got it! A sterling example of free verse, free verse, that it, done damned right!
Life-affirming, joyful, wry, intelligent. Because of you (and a handful of other LitNutters), my faith in mankind has been restoreth.

[Haunted]

I'm really dense but I think I got it. You didn't include the toilet seat, but I guess it's a good thing.... Love how you ended it.