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cacian
08-08-2013, 06:14 AM
loneliness
consumes you fresh
devoure
press
feelings of
less
moments
are quest
to low
and rest
before it worse
allow a burse
appeal to merse
active is purse

white camellia
08-09-2013, 06:32 AM
To me the meaning or rather a sensation is not subject to the grammatical relation; each word stands as a sign. The form which is formless gives the poem more freedom to express itself. I found the pic to its left is quite a match.

cacian
08-09-2013, 12:52 PM
white camellia, nice username by the way, I thank you for reading :)