Stauffenberg
08-07-2013, 08:18 PM
Hi, I'm new here.
I need to write a story about charity. The story is about a few students who send a letter to a very rich man for help. Their idea was to obtain one million of dollars for their charitable actions in Africa for education. At the end of their document they said:
1. We are students and we have 1c. We have a dream and our aspiration will guide us. What we only need is 999.999.99 dollars to reach our destination.
(I'm not sure if it's ok to use "reach our destination" as a metaphor there)
2. We are students, we have 1 C and a lot of dreams, wishes and determination. We only need 999,999.99 more euro for our purpose.
3. This travel start with a lot of dreams, wishes, determination and 1 C. We only need 999.999.99 more euro to reach our destination.
The ending quote is my problem. I'm not sure which is Ok. Can anyone help me with an advice or suggestion? :)
Thank you
P.S. I'm not a native speaker of English.
I need to write a story about charity. The story is about a few students who send a letter to a very rich man for help. Their idea was to obtain one million of dollars for their charitable actions in Africa for education. At the end of their document they said:
1. We are students and we have 1c. We have a dream and our aspiration will guide us. What we only need is 999.999.99 dollars to reach our destination.
(I'm not sure if it's ok to use "reach our destination" as a metaphor there)
2. We are students, we have 1 C and a lot of dreams, wishes and determination. We only need 999,999.99 more euro for our purpose.
3. This travel start with a lot of dreams, wishes, determination and 1 C. We only need 999.999.99 more euro to reach our destination.
The ending quote is my problem. I'm not sure which is Ok. Can anyone help me with an advice or suggestion? :)
Thank you
P.S. I'm not a native speaker of English.