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white camellia
08-07-2013, 04:33 AM
The day is touched with a tragic feeling
A moment outside History -
An innocent you, the honest me.
Every thought of you, a phone call linking
The absence of your presence,
The echoing voices of your essence,
Of the very singularity in your entirety,
Suffice, for my mortal duration,
With all its desires, achings,
Fleshy ideas in suicidal silence -
At the gate of a world, a Myth

virtuoso
08-07-2013, 09:14 AM
I like the line "the absence of your presence". I like the dissonant concepts/ideas.

white camellia
08-08-2013, 03:19 AM
Glad you like it, virtuoso. Thank you for your comment.