Lake Haiku

[Lykren]

I sip lake-water.
Ripple by ripple
reflections disappear.

[virtuoso]

Not a 5-7-5 er , but who cares! I like the movement and then contraction. It is an intoxicating poem. You sip the briny water, it ripples, then the drunken side-effects. Enjoyed your haiku.