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Nacht-Jagen
08-01-2013, 03:05 AM
Night falls.
Your eyes grow weary.
Your limbs feel heavy.
You begin to fall into dreamland.
The night air is cool and crisp.
The stars bright.
You dream of a beach.
Ocean waves crashing softly.
Cool sand.
I approach.
Like a shadow, I move.
Embodiment of death.
You run.
You fall.
I strike.
"Silence, My Dear."
You awake.
I'm asleep next to you.

I love you...

cacian
08-01-2013, 05:46 AM
a beautiful vivid piece.
i enjoyed the short of each line.
this somehow reminds a bit of Romeo and Juliet :)

Nacht-Jagen
08-01-2013, 05:57 AM
a beautiful vivid piece.
i enjoyed the short of each line.
this somehow reminds a bit of Romeo and Juliet :)
Thank you. I can see where you get the Romeo and Juliet from... vaguely. But, nonetheless, I appreciate the compliment.