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cacian
07-17-2013, 06:55 AM
in thoughts
you drew
a feeling blue

i am but woed
to words you
shrude

verbal abstrude
what more to crude

in halt
your mood
possible feud

i could not stood
in soul
you flew
away to whom
i shall not doom

enough has room
but
and i have soon
uplifted moon
to skies upnoon

i wish for night
to bloom in sight
seeing to me
is greater free

your causeways
see pretend
to be I am
all me
aware is key

Dark Muse
07-17-2013, 08:14 PM
I always enjoy reading your poetry. This one was quite interesting. The first lines caught my attention right away. An amusing and thought provoking poem and as always a most clever use of language.

cacian
07-18-2013, 09:59 AM
Dark Muse so glad you liked this one and thank you for reading :)