i'll still smell the roses

[faithmairee]

i'll still smell the roses
so precious and sweet
the scented pine needles
as they hang from the trees

i'll still hear the lonely hounds
at night as they bay
see the sky far above me
be it blue or at times gray

then someone someday
will mention your name
and i'll feel regret in my veins
for in my heart your love remains

[cacian]

this is a beautiful piece faithmairee wonderfully expressed. i especially like the middle stanza very nice :)

[nayyarsarah]

thats a nice piece. keep it up.

[faithmairee]

Nayyarsrah-Thank you for taking the time to read and respond to my poem. I appreciate it. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[faithmairee]

Cacian-Thank you for your wonderful remarks. I really appreciate them.