You're Crying Again

[angliholic]

In the morning
you were still beaming
brightly like the sunlight in July

All of a sudden
gloomy clouds are flung everywhere
concealing my azure sky
tears pouring down like the thundershower
in the afternoon
in summer

Walking alone in the street
listening to the rhythm of rain you bring
I'm not scared of your lightening or thundering
let alone get dripping wet

For I'm sure
the minute your tears run dry
is the minute I'm about to sample
the most calming rainbow
on your face

[virtuoso]

I have a question about the nature of your, male lover. In the next to last stanza, he is roaring. In the last stanza, he is crying. Wouldn't it sound better, and more consistent to the emotive strain you established in the next to last stanza, to have your male lover braying or roaring in the last stanza. If you said, "After your rant ended", or ""When your bellowing ceased". You would have the calm after the storm! Enjoyed your natural calamity. All relationships ride that roller coaster.

[angliholic]

Ty, virtuoso, for your reply and the advice.