Snow

[munkinhead]

Arrogant,
naive,
something like murder,
can you imagine returning?

[blank|verse]

Oooooo-kay then. Well, this is pretty open-ended, which is to the benefit of the poem - an apostrophe to snow, literal or metaphorical.

Snow is often described as smothering the ground, so could explain why it's 'something like murder'; likewise, the opening adjectives could be attributed to different forms of snow; but then, cocaine ('snow') also makes people arrogant, and perhaps gives us more of an indication to the final question than otherwise.

Skewed and imaginative as always.

[Jack of Hearts]

Sometimes reading munkinhead feels like touching the Dao, some shadowy unspeakable underbelly of a long forgotten thought pattern. And other times it's like a shred of newspaper stuck to the sidewalk. Sometimes these two interactions occur in the same piece.






J

[munkinhead]

Just a little heat stroke.
newspaper poetry, I like the sound of that
www.visualnews.com/2013/02//15/newspaper-blackout-poetry/

[Jerrybaldy]

Not sure about this one Munkin. Nothing to hang my hat on. Or head in your case

[virtuoso]

How about "con-descending". A con descending! Ok, here's a total revision!

Con-descending
murderous track
covering his ground
melting away


I liked your version just as much. I hope you will tolerate this preversion of your pristine verse.