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Dark Muse
07-02-2013, 09:34 PM
Sea Quark: an elementary particle and fundamental constituent of matter. They come in what are called 6 flavors which are known as up, down, charm, strange, top, bottom.

Strange Charm

Unilateral motion compels; the universe defying gravity
practical matter penetrates though uncertainty.

Disconnected from the center; galaxies spiraling outward
outer dimensions collide; descent becoming eminent,
wavelengths vibrate in disharmony creating only dissonance
navigating through ethereal waters; wading through quagmires.

Charming quarks, cosmic quirks; the universal kink
harrowing journeys through spatial reality
antimatter, antithesis, the anti quark; magnetic repulsion
reflection upon minor anomalies occurring spontaneously
movement propels; reverse, unwind, labyrinthine circles.

Speculative truth, our lives reinterpreting each other
traveling through longitudinal silence
retrograde appetites inertly degrade
atmosphere heavily hangs, visceral enough to swim through
normalcy staggers beyond the meridian, trapped in continuous discontent
gamma rays alight; forces unapologetically combust
electric fields ignite unexpectedly guiding the weary to uncharted destinations.

Tantric monks remain without surprise; sage witnesses unwavering
otherwordls vigorously awaiting discovery
patterns emerge leaving behind subtle clews.

Below the tidal line; primordial ooze still lurks unforeseen
obsidian ore, moonless skies, ellipsing eclipses
telekinetic communications subverting the mind subliminally
telescopic visions; a serenade never intended to be played
orbiting spheres soundlessly passing in the dark,
matter materializes; disappointing dreams, beneath nothingness.

amuse
07-05-2013, 09:21 PM
I forgot that I can't press "Like"!

This part was my favorite, esp. because of the use of 'vigorously' describing other worlds while sages were, not impervious per say, but detached; as if life and death and even the emergence of new universes was nothing new to them:

"Tantric monks remain without surprise; sage witnesses unwavering
otherwordls vigorously awaiting discovery
patterns emerge leaving behind subtle clews."

Dark Muse
07-05-2013, 09:57 PM
Thank you very much.

Delta40
07-05-2013, 10:18 PM
Interesting DM. I rather liked the closing stanza in its lurking mystery.

Dark Muse
07-05-2013, 10:24 PM
Thank you!

tailor STATELY
07-12-2013, 08:11 PM
Enjoyed very much. Quite an interesting journey.

The form lends much to the magic.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

Dark Muse
07-12-2013, 09:17 PM
Thank you very much