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Lykren
06-06-2013, 06:54 PM
Her simple energy
communicates itself
across the unhappy land,
through the dire mists
and to the shore.
Cold rhythms pound
the sand there, as if
it were a day for coldness,
and birds huddle close.
Imagination's sea holds the light
like a pearl, as I lift one
and hold it up to the sun.
The gift glitters. I might
wash the space, I know -
but today ought to grace
the evening with colors and colors
of the fields and fields
we shared.

Buh4Bee
06-06-2013, 09:40 PM
I find this to be a beautiful piece in its simplicity.

Delta40
06-06-2013, 09:59 PM
Well done Lykren. Apart from the awful way that colours are spelled, (lol) this is surely one of your best!

Lykren
06-07-2013, 09:04 AM
Thanks to both of you!

blank|verse
06-09-2013, 06:34 AM
Reports of my death have been greatly exaggerated... :)