memory lane

[cacian]

remember
the days
when the sun
shined rays
and the wind
blew hays
across the mountain
bays
we used to run
so brave
towards the highest
planes
to try and catch the sky
painting its own stars haze
then we'd run back
late
laughter cruising
our ways
saying
faster was our game
that we could never
frain
playing was our name
and now that time
has sailed
through memories
we've raised
happy is our
reign
knowing
we've laid
our faith making
our moments
same delighted
to our sake

[YesNo]

A nice, positive way of looking at memories. The "laid our faith" at the end was interesting.

[cafolini]

Good stuff.

[cacian]

thank you both very much :)