sincerely yours

[cacian]

''I have a thought
i wish to share
it
would you
please wear it
sensible dare it?''
to which you answer,
''i may not fair
it but i sure
would bare it
language does
air to
words that rare
and i true court
simply must vert.''

[MysteryGirl]

This is a very well written poem. I found myself lost a little bit in the sentence structure in both a good and bad manner. You've done well, though. And accurately executed a feeling straight from passion and reluctance. Great job here.

[cacian]

MysteryGirl thank you for reading :)