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Jett Black
06-02-2013, 01:41 PM
I often feel like an automated toy
A desperate Dan or an also ran,
Sometimes I wish I was still a boy
And not just a wind-up man.
NickBrown
06-02-2013, 02:49 PM
I really wish people took punctuation into consideration more.
Charles Darnay
06-02-2013, 03:03 PM
"..or an also ran"- that's Cacian level forced rhyme right there.
cafolini
06-02-2013, 04:33 PM
I'm surprise that with all you said you didn't have to wind it again. LOL
Jett Black
06-03-2013, 01:01 PM
I'm surprise that with all you said you didn't have to wind it again. LOL


califini ...
you make me sigh
when I wish that you and I
could see eye to eye
and I wonder why
you make me cry?