true best

[cacian]

i like shallow
because it wallows
on nothing and
when it
rains
it lowers
and
bathes,
depthness,
the conduit
of its light,
rises
and then
lays
weightless,
its
shadows
idless,
mellow
and peak
ripeness,
flawless
feels
tideless.
i like shallow
because hypeness
plys
dice
but slight is
air umcompressed
wild
and
fresh
such is less
a true best.

[Silas Thorne]

Senseless

[Delta40]

...and yet you manage to capture the absolute shallowness of your skill beautifully here. Congratulations - this is your true best!

[cacian]

I thank you both for your comments :)

[Delta40]

My pleasure.