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cacian
05-17-2013, 01:49 PM
poetry is giddy
when it wants
pity
to speak
of words
in
loaded
rhetories
shapes
in
heavy
parodies
morose
is
reveries

but then
it is tricky
when it flips
lippy
to
curse
bursts
of feelings
emotions
heave
stealing
happiness
from rearing
such is
teasing
never ending
leaping

but then
it is
seeming
when it
comes in
readings
of beautiful
meanings
and
symbols
of sympathies
to life
the world
streams in poetries
that real
in memories
of dreams
such is realm

Shaman_Raman
05-17-2013, 02:40 PM
I like. If I may add a suggestion, end on "of dreams" over "such is realms."

Is retories a noun for rhetoric? Wasn't sure on that one.