Passer-by...

[Sweta Jain]

Not much to say just been thinking about you for a while,
Living again some sweet moments that're now lost in time,
Of how some events will repeat themselves, but we'll never be the same,
How life goes on always, we change forever but memories remain,
Yeah there's a bridge between us that neither can cross,
But when i look at you, i can feel in me the love that once was,
Beholding closer each memory as we move towards the end,
Still wonder if you ever felt anything or you're touched the way i am,
Hold you closer because i sense its soon gonna be time to go our seperate ways,
Feel like we're distant when you dont hold me back, but then you didn't pull away,
Just hope for a moment, i can see a glimpse of the truth,
Know f you ever did love, did it mean something at all to you,
You've touched my heart and made an imprnt that'll last for long,
Wonder if i ever had a place or was just another passer-by who never mattered....

[ksvane]

I like the diary entry-ish, casual style of it. You might wanna proofread it though, I see a few typos. :) Pretty easy to read because it is lacking strange complexities, creative imagery and all that - but if simplicity is your style, then so be it. While love-poems looking back at "the way things used to be" are somewhat cliché, the important role of reflection and closure they serve to those writing them is frequently overlooked and undervalued.

[Sweta Jain]

Thanks a lot for your in-depth analysis...loved it..yeah you figured out correct..simplicity is my style:)
i'll proof read it..sorry for the typos..:)