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cacian
04-26-2013, 06:00 AM
the dream unfolds
quickly so
forth
in front of me
my eyes
so close
speechless declares
perhaps it's blurr
tricky is dare
but this is worlds
a place of rare
a name could not
prescribes it fair

books would not stir
to its compare
fictional blares
fantasy stares
never would will
intensive bills

imagine air
from pink to claire
crystals of rayers
spin to its layers
cubism swears
trivial is tare

birds from afar
as far mars
venus the stars
balance to speech
an opera sweep
sound is a fleet
to dancing beats
magic is leaped
mosaic weeps

the dream unfolds
quickly
so forth
in front of
me
my eyes
so close
i see but wise
rising to highs
to signal wild is
peace to us
never a dream came real
so near
emotions feel
a life is a realm
when shaken willed

osho
04-26-2013, 10:41 AM
your poem is entertaining despite a few incongruity.There is indeed a manifestatiom of beauty.

cacian
04-26-2013, 11:49 AM
osho thank you for reading I thought I write about dreams since your thread was/is about dreams :)