charms

[cacian]

the sun shines
my heart finds
timeless of sounds
sing song and mimes
rythme is mine

the wind chimes
my self consoles
to waves of breeze
peaceful is pleased

the rivers swell
i take to strolls
across the fields
the wheat browse
woodland is crown

the clouds round
i feel the swave
rain always winds
seasonal blooms
nature reaps tunes

the day flies
i stumble faith
it tells me
life is purpose
kind
i keen to same

the night rives
i know i sigh
beautiful thoughts
aboard the soul
love is a host

[YesNo]

I hear mostly two accented syllables per line and the thoughts the words bring to my mind do seem soothing and charming as the title suggests although I probably don't understand correctly all of the lines.

[cacian]

YesNo thank you :)

[cafolini]

In spite of it all, we have to give Cacian some due credit. It is because of the things Cacian tells us that we often think twice before we unconsciously and solemnly ****up.

[cacian]

In spite of it all, we have to give Cacian some due credit. It is because of the things Cacian tells us that we often think twice before we unconsciously and solemnly ****up.

LOL such is life screwed up but then wait isn't poetry suppose to even it out ;) I am a great believer in words healing.