!!! Short story !!!

[Tayfur gazioglu]

POOR FISH

There was a fish in the sea. Was very poor. Searches can not find jobs, returning wanderer visit. One day these fish have been to the beach. They also say
"Look, the poor fish, against which the asset pool has a stigma. Get rich if you can get there. “ Poor fish out to the beach. At the top of the sand has a somersault, flounder had reached the end of the pool assets, and were jumping into the water. To the pool until the show followed the efforts of the rich fish poor fish had given various gifts and meet with enthusiasm. These gifts were so many that no longer the poor fish, fish became rich. Rich fish eyes into the sea from the day following a poor vertical and wait for the fish started coming to the pool. Rich fish and help if they want if they do not fish in the world, one poor. For this, the stigma of the pool will need to reach out to the sea. But I do not want any, because of the poor fish unnecessary fear. This fear defeat if they will happily embrace. Time is not yet passed. Separated from the sea into a rich mound of fish and sea they're coming for the poor fish, I would like to see them, they applauded.

:prrr:

[hillwalker]

Unreadable because your ability to write coherently in English is non-existent.

H

[Tayfur gazioglu]

it is new generation english bro. Thanks for your commend.

[Shaman_Raman]

it is new generation english bro. Thanks for your commend.

Excuse me? Listen bro, it's one thing to write a bad short story, it's another to write in a way no one understands. And don't say it's a generational thing because that's an insult to those your age who write coherently.

One example..."Searches cannot find jobs, returning wanderer visit." Wtf does that mean?

[AuntShecky]

it is new generation english bro. Thanks for your commend.

Get me a bleeping time machine! I want to go back.

[hillwalker]

it is new generation english bro. Thanks for your commend.

Which planet do you inhabit, bro? - out of curiosity.

H