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imesheka Dixon
04-22-2013, 05:59 PM
Short story rough draft

"Amore" calls mom. "Yes mom?" "Can you sit down we have to talk to you about something". "ok" amore says with a confused look on her face." " Amore daddy got promoted at work today." "WHAT! Congrats dad, I knew you would you work to hard not to and I really think you should take the job". Amore cheerful says to her father. Mr.Johnson cheerfully smiles. "But" mom interrupts. "But what mom" amore says anxiously. "But in order for your father to take the job we're going to have to move to New York". "WHAT! MOM DAD WE CAN'T MOVE FROM KANSAS WE JUST CAN'T". Yells amore. " but sweetheart we have to its more money and it would really help make ends meet with all of these doctors bills we have now" Says mom. "Honey look I'm sorry your having a hard time dealing with this, but I know you'll fit in just fine down there" says dad as he puts his and on her shoulder trying his best to comfort her. "But dad I'm only 15 and I'm just really getting used to middle school, if you guys take me out now I would just die". Yells amore as she storms out the kitchen door. ...... Next day at school....
" Amore I can't believe your really moving, I'm really going to miss you" says Britt. "I know Britt I still can't believe it ether, I'm going to miss you too. I'm going to miss us running up and down these halls as we talk stuff to the guys" says amore so sadly. "Hey amore you still haven't told Jessie McGee that you have a big crush on him". "Shhhhhh! Don't say that out loud people will hear you". Britt's laughs " so are you going to tell him before you leave? " NO WAY!". "Why not? " what for it would be pointless now" Amore explains. Ding Ding goes the tardy bell as amore and Britt runs down the hall to class. "Your late Ms. Johnson and Ms. Bells". "I know and we're so sorry Ms.Mackey the time slip pass us" quickly says Amore. "yea were so sorry Ms.Mackey it won't happen again" Britt follows in behind amore.