Putting Too Much Faith Into A Dog

[OshaiJohnson]

Alone, lonely, unloved, isolated and abandoned is exactly how I was feeling as I stared at the wall as I was rocking my 5 month old daughter to sleep. I felt as if I was a bad parent or something,even though I know I tried my best to do whatever I could for my child, but according to her mother I was nothing but a deadbeat ...

[cafolini]

So? Continue. Who's the dog.

[Buh4Bee]

Raw...

[hillwalker]

For such a short piece it's cluttered with redundancies and repetitions - 'alone, lonely' - 'as I stared. . . as I was rocking'.

It's like you wrote the opening two sentences to a story (?) then gave up without bothering to even edit.

H