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Erjona Beqaj
04-22-2013, 02:56 PM
Hi everyone this is what i have done so far for this assignment. I would to see some suggestions or ideas how i can continuing it. Thank you

It was a beautiful autumn day; the streets were covered by the leaves of the trees. The sun was rising and it was disturbing his rays all over the sky. Flowers were almost losing their petals but some of them still were thriving. It would say that these were the last days of autumn. The streets were buzzing from people’s steps, people moving, many were going fast, some of them were talking to the phone, a girl was listening music with the headsets and it looked like she didn’t care about the others. For many people this was a usual rash day, a monotone day, doing the same things as always.
“It is so wonderful to see the city from here”- thought Laura. It has been 4 years now since she has started working in that tall building and she still remembered it as it was the first day. Laura was an accountant in the most powerful companies in New York and she started working here when she was 22 years old. She was a beautiful woman with her graces and her skinny body, her long blond hears, her blue eyes whose she always says that she took them from her mother. It looks like time has not gone for her even if it didn’t treat her good…

Calidore
04-22-2013, 06:16 PM
Was your assignment simply to write a story about anything, or were there guidelines of some kind?

Also, if you're asking for more ideas just two paragraphs into this one, it's a lost cause. Start again and this time write about someone/something more familiar to you.

Erjona Beqaj
04-22-2013, 09:02 PM
Thank you, i really appreciate your idea. In fact, it is no guideline for this assignment, it is a free topic.