Geraldo Braho
04-16-2013, 02:16 AM
It was Sunday, My mum and dad were working and they would not come at home that night.Me my little brother and my friend Mike would stay alone at my house. Me and my family had just moved in that house. "Lets play hide and seek" I told to Mike . He didn't hesitated. I closed my eyes and start counting " 1,2,3,4,5.....10 I'm coming " after some couples of minutes i found mike but i was trying to find my brother. i looked around about 30 minutes but i couldn't find him. i got worried . i told mike that i couldn't find him . mike asked me if i searched everywhere. i told him yes i did but is just one place where i could not go . it was the roof. the roof was so dirty and there were a lot of boxes.It was nearing twelve o’clock at night. Inventory was tedious, the warehouse was hot and had no A.C., but we were getting paid overtime, which made it worth it. We were the only two left; everyone else was gone hours ago. suddenly a storm started and wind was blowing so crazy. all the windows opened and a creepy noise was hearing all the house.
“I’m gonna close the windows,” I said. Mike nodded. He started counting the boxes that were there as I walked off to close the windows
I opened the door to the my father's office . Through the large glass window I saw her , for the first time.
she was white as snow, her hair a light, wispy blonde. she wore a thin, faintly blue dress, nearly translucent in the light of the thunders. She lifted a finger, beckoning me.
Then, as soon as I saw it , it was gone. I shook my head and blinked, and yet saw nothing but the darkness and the thunder light beyond the door.
Half sure I had saw nothing and half sure it was a trick of my mind, I turned right and went into the bathroom.
I pulled out my phone. For some reason, the Internet wasn’t working. “Damn wi-fi,” I muttered and placed it back in my pocket. Then the hissing began.
At first it was faint, and I assumed it was only the plumbing. And yet, as it grew louder and louder it began to sound more and more like a voice – the voice of a woman.
Suddenly, the sound was unbearably loud, and then it began – the rattling.
The door was kicked , as if someone on the other side was trying to get in. Soon the door began to shake, and within seconds the whole stall was in convulsion.
The hissing grew only louder, and formed into words.
“Come to me,” it beckoned. “Come to meeeee,” it whispered into my ear.
A mixture of terror and shock had me frozen, glued to the bathroom Then I looked down. Below the door I saw her – her feet.
“Come to meeeee.”
Suddenly, in a burst of courage , I ran through the door, knocking into it with both fists. And everything was quiet.
I stood there, breathless, staring at the door, not daring to look down. Finally my eyes dragged down to the floor.
The feet were gone. The door creaked open, seemingly of its own will. I almost left then and there. I almost bolted out of the building. But I knew I couldn’t leave Mike and my brother with her in here, and knew I had no choice but to return to the roof.
“Mike !” I yelled at the top of my lungs, as I pushed through the door.. “mike ! We have to find my brother and leave – NOW!”
I heard no reply. Terror gripped me, but I kept going.
When I made it to the end of the roof I saw him, lying down . His feet were tied together with electrical wire, . . His tongue was stretched out across his face, a long, crude, rusted nail driven through it into his forehead. I couldn’t move.
That’s when the hissing began again – at once as loud as it was before. In the hissing I heard her whispers.
“Come to me.” She said. “Come to me.”
I turned around, and looked straight into her burning red eyes. Her mouth slipped open as she repeated her mantra. She extended her arms and embraced me.
I closed my eyes shut, for the final time
"I got you" he said............... "hahahahaahahahahha""
It was a prank from my brother.....
mike and my brother were laughing but my heart was still beating crazy ......
“I’m gonna close the windows,” I said. Mike nodded. He started counting the boxes that were there as I walked off to close the windows
I opened the door to the my father's office . Through the large glass window I saw her , for the first time.
she was white as snow, her hair a light, wispy blonde. she wore a thin, faintly blue dress, nearly translucent in the light of the thunders. She lifted a finger, beckoning me.
Then, as soon as I saw it , it was gone. I shook my head and blinked, and yet saw nothing but the darkness and the thunder light beyond the door.
Half sure I had saw nothing and half sure it was a trick of my mind, I turned right and went into the bathroom.
I pulled out my phone. For some reason, the Internet wasn’t working. “Damn wi-fi,” I muttered and placed it back in my pocket. Then the hissing began.
At first it was faint, and I assumed it was only the plumbing. And yet, as it grew louder and louder it began to sound more and more like a voice – the voice of a woman.
Suddenly, the sound was unbearably loud, and then it began – the rattling.
The door was kicked , as if someone on the other side was trying to get in. Soon the door began to shake, and within seconds the whole stall was in convulsion.
The hissing grew only louder, and formed into words.
“Come to me,” it beckoned. “Come to meeeee,” it whispered into my ear.
A mixture of terror and shock had me frozen, glued to the bathroom Then I looked down. Below the door I saw her – her feet.
“Come to meeeee.”
Suddenly, in a burst of courage , I ran through the door, knocking into it with both fists. And everything was quiet.
I stood there, breathless, staring at the door, not daring to look down. Finally my eyes dragged down to the floor.
The feet were gone. The door creaked open, seemingly of its own will. I almost left then and there. I almost bolted out of the building. But I knew I couldn’t leave Mike and my brother with her in here, and knew I had no choice but to return to the roof.
“Mike !” I yelled at the top of my lungs, as I pushed through the door.. “mike ! We have to find my brother and leave – NOW!”
I heard no reply. Terror gripped me, but I kept going.
When I made it to the end of the roof I saw him, lying down . His feet were tied together with electrical wire, . . His tongue was stretched out across his face, a long, crude, rusted nail driven through it into his forehead. I couldn’t move.
That’s when the hissing began again – at once as loud as it was before. In the hissing I heard her whispers.
“Come to me.” She said. “Come to me.”
I turned around, and looked straight into her burning red eyes. Her mouth slipped open as she repeated her mantra. She extended her arms and embraced me.
I closed my eyes shut, for the final time
"I got you" he said............... "hahahahaahahahahha""
It was a prank from my brother.....
mike and my brother were laughing but my heart was still beating crazy ......