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ShadowsCool
04-09-2013, 04:37 PM
I saw the sky one day
Painted with white puffs,
And there were swirling winds
Dancing along hillsides
That sketched your face.
And fluffy snow was
Upon your eyes,
As you gazed up
In the celestial heavens.

And there were angels
That spoke with you,
All of them ghostlike,
Like glowing lights.
And there were birds
That flew all around;
And I was left amazed
At what my eyes saw.

And I heard sounds,
Sparrow birds singing praise.
And I saw your lips
Soft as a rose bloom,
Sprouted beautifully
Pressed on mine.
And against the pinkish sky
I saw a portrait of us in heaven.

miyako73
04-09-2013, 04:45 PM
white puffs, swirling winds, celestial heavens, fluffy snow, pinkish sky-- so cute, so familiar, and so tiring to read.

Buh4Bee
04-09-2013, 05:39 PM
Shadows, I always enjoy your romantic poetry, even if it has its own flaws like many of the poems you read here.

ShadowsCool
04-09-2013, 05:44 PM
Shadows, I always enjoy your romantic poetry, even if it has its own flaws like many of the poems you read here.

Thank you Buh4Bee!

ShadowsCool
04-09-2013, 05:56 PM
white puffs, swirling winds, celestial heavens, fluffy snow, pinkish sky-- so cute, so familiar, and so tiring to read.

I'll make sure to post more!