solace

[cacian]

you curl up
to a promise
to will there is
solace
an ideal a closet
to burst with wishes
hopes
but then a tear
falls out
sudden
out of the blue
from underneath
the true
it strips away
the ray the maker of the say
and banish self belief
it's almost late to grief
a promise never preach

[cafolini]

The only meaninful solace is a grave. Not one ascends alone.

[cacian]

a grave is a place of rest where none of us the living could ever take a guess to its goings on.
Ascension is a dimension to which we must all learn to climb. The heights of it is a meaning found within its feelings. I guess those who look would find and those who do not would wind down that is.

[miyako73]

Your set of vocabulary is enough to produce good poetry. Don't waste it.