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cacian
04-02-2013, 06:06 AM
as the eastern egg
fallen out of shelf
it cracked a billion
elves
who'd all ran out
of weath
the river banks
trust worth
they'd heard about
the curse
turned up to see
to elves
who'd sat along the
ferns
weeping they'd wished
return
to their shelters of shells
it was the best they'd had
the helpers of the trust
took heartly to their
frust
and offered them a term
for them to live and
well
such was to story
elf developed into
dwell a jolly book
of tells
for all to rare
and glare
whenever elf's air
takes to the fancy pair

YesNo
04-02-2013, 08:59 AM
I like the phrase "jolly book of tells" and "eastern egg". I read it as an elfish creation story.

cacian
04-02-2013, 02:30 PM
YesNo thank you so much for reading :)