Poems are impulsive, like suicide

[Lykren]

Poems are impulsive, like suicide.
You push
and they come,
dizzy with loneliness
and luminousness.
You leap
and awe
comes rushing in,
like a memory of something
you have seen
and once survived.

[Delta40]

Remove luminousness. Perhaps luminosity?

[Lykren]

I considered luminosity, but explicitly discarded it in favor of luminousness.