You're gonna see it's our DESTINY!! You got a friend in me!

[Adolescent09]

Freestyle Rap Rhyme

From opaque naught
Spring floods of light
A puissant draught
To Vanquish plight

From graves of guile
to heavenly loom
Dark ones revile
Their imminent tomb

©Adol09

[cacian]

Very good indeed. :)
Any reason why vanquish with a capital V?

I enjoyed this stanza a lot

From graves of guile
to heavenly loom
Dark ones revile
Their imminent tomb

This is very inspiring. I like the idea of rap poetry.
oh I like the word puissant. I tend to mix few French word in the making too. ;)

[Adolescent09]

Very good indeed. :)
Any reason why vanquish with a capital V?

I enjoyed this stanza a lot

From graves of guile
to heavenly loom
Dark ones revile
Their imminent tomb

This is very inspiring. I like the idea of rap poetry.
oh I like the word puissant. I tend to mix few French word in the making too. ;)

Thank-you, cacian. I was trying to come up with a poem to read to the children of the church I attend, but I am assuming this is too difficult. Vanquish should be lower-case :)