On a Cute Girl's Suicide

[Lykren]

*Removed!*

I'm submitting this for publication, so it can't be up anywhere else. Sorry!

[qimissung]

Like, very much, although the title creates an unpleasant dissonance. Perhaps that's intended.

[Lykren]

Qimi, you're right, the title is an odd one. It came to me while writing the poem, but it does seem to have that air of being separate from the tone of the poem. Nevertheless, I'll keep it as is, mostly because I can't think of anything better!

[Delta40]

I like this as well Lykren

[Lykren]

Thanks Delta.