awake!

[cacian]

take a break
save a take
become the sake
can you see fake
rev up
those layers
of ennui
and prayers?

timid is shyer
too slow to pier
brave is rayer
it shines your
way
to imagine
flair
the ware
is bare
beyond the swears
that love is but fair

take a lake
throw the rake
no need to break
the speed of hake
life has a date
for you to stake
the momentum
the wake

[Adolescent09]

Oh my gosh...

Do you have a SERIOUS case of writer's block? I can't help but say this... Modern day rap looks like Shakespearean or Dante Alighieri's writing compared to this. I didn't think I'd ever say it, but listening to 2 Chainz sounds less torturous! I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and assume you have a writer's block like I do. I sincerely hope you get through it.

[cacian]

Oh my gosh...

Do you have a SERIOUS case of writer's block? I can't help but say this... Modern day rap looks like Shakespearean or Dante Alighieri's writing compared to this. I didn't think I'd ever say it, but listening to 2 Chainz sounds less torturous! I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and assume you have a writer's block like I do. I sincerely hope you get through it.

and the reader failed to save the sound for its meaning lol
I have to admit I am lucky no SERIOUS writer's block whatsoever Never had one and never will. I am sorry to hear you have the WB its sounds herrific.
Remember there is also the reader's block that is one fails to see pass words and meanings. :)

[cafolini]

And the baby failed to save the village with his firehose...
and some came from far away to teach him hosing
but the man failed to save the village with his firehose...
and some came from outer space to give him clues
but the man failed to become a fireman
so the women infuriated bobitted him
and the man had a reader-pissing block

[WolfLarsen]

And the baby failed to save the village with his firehose...
and some came from far away to teach him hosing
but the man failed to save the village with his firehose...
and some came from outer space to give him clues
but the man failed to become a fireman
so the women infuriated bobitted him
and the man had a reader-pissing block

Nice!

[cacian]

And the baby failed to save the village with his firehose...
and some came from far away to teach him hosing
but the man failed to save the village with his firehose...
and some came from outer space to give him clues
but the man failed to become a fireman
so the women infuriated bobitted him
and the man had a reader-pissing block

and as the hose said to the master
there ain't enough pressure
to rusher gusher