step up

[cacian]

misunderstood
courageous
brood
never carouse
ideas loose
think tank's
a crude
before the
vexed
the laxed
the lapsed
live life
the full
equip it
shrude
strategic proves

[osho]

Cacain, keep on writing, versifying. You have the urge, the passion. Few have that which you have. Poetry is an uncharted path. Ideas and opinions differ to define what poetry is. Critics can criticize but they have no shred of emotion but you have or else we could not get a poet like you on this forum.

Keep up and we are always to read and appreciate the inner beauty of your rhymes.

[cacian]

osho thanks for reading and commenting.:)