a folly

[cacian]

the lovelyness
in which you dress
is like a tress made out of s
the colour press
is symbol fait
of follies

I guess
it 's mess
the way
the rest
is plunged in dests
whilst others
waste their
percious faith
in beauty quests
one minute's bliss
the world is tips
to dollar desks
the next
it's
pest
the time is nest
to problem stress

the lovelyness in
which your dress
is quizzed with
less
that in a
sense
is pure depress

[osho]

There are interesting points if obsession with rhyme is in control

[cacian]

There are interesting points if obsession with rhyme is in control
Thank you osho for reading and feeback.:)
I have indeed gone through some words and rectified the meanings.
I agree with your comments haha I cannot help but rhyme the unrhymed. Sometimes the seriousness of event must be alleviated by other means such less focus on issues and more on rhythm. It is like a guitar where the sound must precede the lyrics to make them less serious.

[osho]

Thank you osho for reading and feeback.:)
I agree with your comments haha I cannot help but rhyme the unrhymed. Sometimes the seriousness of event must be alleviated by other means such less focus on issues and more on rhythm. It is like a guitar where the sound must precede the lyrics to make them less serious.

True and interesting! If the sound precedes the lyrics we can dance to the noise but the amalgamation of both is likely to be catalytic.

[cacian]

True and interesting! If the sound precedes the lyrics we can dance to the noise but the amalgamation of both is likely to be catalytic.

LOL indeed I can imagine stringing out lyrics out to fade in the background order to stress on music memory. I much prefer remembering soothing sound to lyrics because creative sound is imaginative and abundant.