Royle

[cacian]

i love my
world when
it tells me
to strain no mold
and break no fold
but to play sold
everytime gold
is past its hold
logically
i suspect it's
bold that nature
spoils in order
to retain its royle

[jayat]

It looks like a Bob Dylan's song, makes me think in "Subterranean Homesick Blues"...You know "Jhonny is the basemen/, mixing up the medecines/ I'm on the pavement/ thinking about the goverment..." and so on. Good.

[cafolini]

Cacian and Jayat = Bob Dylans. ROFLMAO!

[hillwalker]

This is as far removed from Dylan's exquisite word play as one can get. Lines 4-to-8 are like a demented nursery rhyme strung together by a malfunctioning robot.

Poetry? Don't make me laugh.

H

[Emil Miller]

This is as far removed from Dylan's exquisite word play as one can get. Lines 4-to-8 are like a demented nursery rhyme strung together by a malfunctioning robot.

Poetry? Don't make me laugh.

H


Johny's in the basement
Mixing up the medicine
I'm on the pavement
Thinking about the government

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