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jmany2
02-21-2013, 04:24 PM
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Charles Darnay
02-21-2013, 08:16 PM
needs more dots.
Calidore
02-22-2013, 09:24 AM
needs more dots.

I disagree; repetition is the bane of writing. Add some flavor with dashes, commas, and whatnot. Even a tilde or circumflex if you want to be daring.
Bustrofedon
02-22-2013, 05:10 PM
No, the double ellipsis is perfect. Pause then another pause right on top of it. The suspense is palpable.
ennison
03-10-2013, 11:22 AM
I think you're reading between the dots, Bustrofedon.