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firestarter
04-10-2003, 06:35 PM
Take me from this hole.
This ground aroused in silence.
Darker than black, but i can see.
I am home.
No more worries can escape me now.
For familiar grounds protect me.

firestarter

shadow
04-10-2003, 07:32 PM
dark but good 8)

Phantom
04-10-2003, 07:33 PM
keep up the good work

Foxvoices
05-14-2006, 01:10 AM
I like the darkness of this piece, but why do you open with "Take me from this hole" when you welcome it as familiar ground.