beauty

[cacian]

as perfect
goes
it never worse
only the curse
and so
be first
to tell
the pursed
beauty is
must
or else
it's bust

[osho]

Beauty lies in the beholder and of course the beauty you have vented is perfect beauty and when it is pursed, I think you mean contained within preset dimensions this gets bust. I am unsure of my understanding of the reading of the poem since as a true and seamless poet you strategically layered the meaning.

[Irishcrusader95]

interesting way of presenting it, what were you aiming for in its writing, that beauty has a one shot at impressing or just that it is all in the eyes of the beholder?

[cacian]

Hi Irishcrusader and thank you for asking. Beauty is perfect when it is meant and presented in its best performance. Whilst one can appear attractive their look may not hold it well.
And so believe in beauty and it should believe in you. In other words say you are and you shall be.