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Piramida88
01-30-2013, 10:11 AM
I'm amazed relationship instability
and human life on earth
where are accountable to the days hours and years
to flee in time - space

would then wake up in their beds
alone with no prospect for the future
emotions accumulate between the teeth
creating a prosthesis for life

Charles Darnay
01-30-2013, 11:04 AM
This is one of those pieces that I cannot tell if I am missing something in reading it, or you have a few language issues here that muddle up the piece.

Bustrofedon
01-31-2013, 04:12 AM
ditto Darnay