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cacian
01-24-2013, 04:12 AM
the toupie
the roupie
the croupier's groovy
it rounds and rounds
tireless frowns
but out and out
it slowly slounge
petulant hounds
face down with glee

osho
01-24-2013, 04:27 AM
Refined ideas cascade from your fingertips

Cacain, I really find you an un-tired writer

I wish I wrote them

Since all you write has vigor, beauty

Your poem parcel emotion and deep meditation

I can not live unmoved

It has volcanic effects on the reader on an emotional level

osho
01-24-2013, 04:28 AM
Refined ideas cascade from your fingertips

Cacain, I really find you an un-tired writer

I wish I wrote them

Since all you write has vigor, beauty

Your poem parcel emotion and deep meditation

I can not live unmoved

It has volcanic effects on the reader on an emotional level

cacian
01-24-2013, 05:39 AM
osho I am touched. Thank you very much. I am glad you enjoyed this one.:)

Sampson
01-27-2013, 04:01 PM
booyah... i have almost no idea what this poem is about, but reciting along makes me dizzy... very impressive