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cacian
01-22-2013, 05:54 AM
the sheer
the pastel clear
they blend a tear
otherwise feared
into a meer
allusion
hint

tempting is near
however leer
wanting to steer
the pallid tear
into austere
the dramateer

but lilac
hears
lavender sips
a tearful lip
into eclipse and strips
it grip
and off it
slips
the fear
is quit
classic it's
win

WolfLarsen
01-22-2013, 08:25 PM
With the rhymes it's like nails on blackboard! This is a very sadistic poem. Maybe that's the point. To torture us.

cacian
01-23-2013, 03:10 AM
Haha thank you Wolf and I see/saw about the rhymes. Thank you for pointing them out.