Poem

[PrinceMyshkin]

There are people
on either side of the wind
as the world spins
around and back,
neither taut nor slack,
and the tick tock tick of time
is both inexorable and sad..

[AuntShecky]

Good to see you posting again. I like the sound effects, alliteration and what-not, in this short piece.

[Hawkman]

Nice to see you flitting through, Prince. I do like this. pithy, as always, with a leavening of the playful in the assonance and alliteration. More please.

live and be well - H

[deryk]

You convey the bitter-sweet undercurrents of a shared unconsciousness in those precise little lines of yours.